Audience Feedback on Rough Cut

In order to improve our coursework we had to receive audience feedback. So I posted our rough cut on my facebook account to see what my friends would think of it. This is a summary of our findings:

• the costumes fit the genre 
• need a girl in the video 
• introduce a narrative 
• more cut aways needed 
• the location fits the genre well
• the transitions were cut to the beat very well